Ayame Kia
Academy Student
And your point would be...?
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Post by Ayame Kia on Feb 22, 2011 4:45:02 GMT -5
name
Ayame Kia
age
16 yrs old
birthday:17/02
gender
female
sexuality
straight
grade
11
occupation
On school track team, works at lifeline
appearance
Ayame Has short brown hair which goes to hai chin with blue hair clips she never takes out her eyes are as blue as the clear blue sky but very dark when she is upset, she is very pale with rosey cheeks her lips look as thought she ha pink lipstick on thought she never wears make up if she's in the mood she'll put her hair in to two cute little piggy tails with her pikachu hair ties.
personality
Ayame is a very shy girl around people she doesnt know or in frout of many but if your a close friend she well be bubbly an kind very hype if she has had to meany lollies. If someone hurts her friends she can be very ... lets say scary for the person who has done it. when she is sad you cant really tell cause she hides it very well with her kindhearted smile. she IS very clumsy she will fall over anything thats she doesnt see.
likes
- Lollies
-Friends
-Zombie Games
-Puppies
-kittens
-RATS!! an ect
dislikes
-bullys
-sexest ppl
-little sisters
-clowns
history
Ayame was born in Australia but moved away when her and her twin brother Alec were 12. As she started her first year of middle school her farther died in a car crash. Her and her brother were sent to live with there grandmother for there mother had never had any contact with them.And to this day She lives with her Grandmother an twin brother. |
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Ayame Kia
Academy Student
And your point would be...?
Posts: 9
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Post by Ayame Kia on Feb 22, 2011 4:45:25 GMT -5
just telll me if u wish me to do more ^^
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Post by Rin Aki on Feb 22, 2011 5:56:48 GMT -5
Hmm, well there's just a few small issues with this one. One of those is grammar, its very hear to read. So I'd go over it and place commas and end sentences where needed. Spelling is also a big one. Again, its makes it very heard to read. And the age for juniors/Grade 11s is 17. If she were to be 16, she would be a junior/ 10th grade. Also, there is no Lifeline store on this site. So, you can either suggest one in the Question's and Suggestions board,or you could choose another shop for her to have a job at. Until you fix that, I can't approve it. So just fix it up and you're good to go!  |
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Ayame Kia
Academy Student
And your point would be...?
Posts: 9
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Post by Ayame Kia on Feb 22, 2011 8:04:38 GMT -5
yer kk ^^ an u know i cant spell better then anyone else XD but i'll try to fix that up XP
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If your heart tells you something, but your head says something else, the smartest thing would be to shut up and walk away.
